Interactive Stories
Chapter 8: Change of heart

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The crazed neobat maximal continued to lunge at him, but Limeare's voice calmed the questionable bat. He was telling its main computer to transform. It quickly replied, and the robot within was revealed. A glitch occurred though, and a spark or two sizzled from a wire. The transformer called itself Criticom. He then asked the usual:
Who?... What?... When?... Where?... Why?... How?...

This, of course, was very usual for new transformers. Limeare then answered,"You're a maximal sworn protector of all sentient beings. You also share a likeness of Pock in your personality which I wonder about. All I know is you just killed him."

At this very second, Pock arose heavily damaged. Limeare could only staer in amazement. Criticom extended his wing towards him, and a hole appeared at the tip of his wing, A cord came out. It touched Pock and stayed on him. A bright aura which appeared around him which his body greatly reflected, and his body regained his lost parts through regeneration and that same way his scars were healed in the same way.


What do you do now?

Continue to gaze in amazement.
Freak out and call for help.



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